depressured: (That's gray and lonely)
Mafuyu "this fish tank like me fr" Asahina ([personal profile] depressured) wrote in [community profile] liminalteashop 2025-05-07 12:40 pm (UTC)

I think ordinarily it would be too strong, but it does add a sense of stakes right at the beginning and allows the audience to understand just what kind of situation the lead is in... so it makes sense to establish that right at the beginning.

[ It should really hook them. ]

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